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Observational Poem

October 6, 2015
By Anonymous

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Makes me just want to climb

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Just like an issue with your bladder

The birds fill the air with their chirping
Sounds just like my brother burping
Smelling the freshly cut grass
Just like the sound of brass

The student parking lot
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The bees are buzzing

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o the band drumming


The author's comments:

I was outside enjoying nature and I decided to write a poem about what I observed using all five of my senses.


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