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Still I'll Rise

August 16, 2015
By Traveasha BRONZE, Heena, Arkansas
Traveasha BRONZE, Heena, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"You're allowed three strikes. You have two balls and a foul. You're going to keep your head in this games."


I wondered was my love too strong

because we didn't last long.

Were your words all lies

or did you think I wouldn't rise?

 

We were floating on cloud nine,

and I just knew you were all mine.

I had this feeling in my heart

that we'd never be torn apart.

 

You tore me down,

and I knew, without you, I'd drown.

You broke my heart in two.

How to fix it? I didn't have a clue,

but still, like Superwoman, I'll rise.

 

You said, " Our love is forever."

Boy weren't those words clever.

We had so much ambition,

but you messed up our vision.

Still, standing all alone, I'll rise.

 

Mama always said there was no love without war.

I guess that was my que to get off the floor.

I have to dry my teary eyes

and show you and those other guys

that still, without you, I'll rise.


The author's comments:

I terrible break-up with my high school sweetheart inspired me to write this poem. I hope that every girl out there who's going through a terrible break-up reads my poem and understand that it's okay to cry for awhile. I also want them to understand that they will overcome it and RISE! I like to think of it as a "minor setback for a major comeback."


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