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A Couplet of Sweets

March 30, 2015
By puppycat BRONZE, Chilgokgun, Gyeongsangbuk-do, Other
puppycat BRONZE, Chilgokgun, Gyeongsangbuk-do, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Youth comes but once in a lifetime." - Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


I used to eat quite a few sweeties,

when one day I got diabetes.

 

No more tootsie rolls, they said;

I was sure I would rather be dead!

 

But when I picked up some carrots,

I found out their merits

 

Coupled with fruit purée,

I ate them all day

 

Better than any candy cane;

Vegetables are the best in a way I can't explain!


The author's comments:

Although the poem sounds quite lighthearted and silly, it was inspired by a very serious matter. My dad was diagnosed with diabetes a long time ago, and I saw for myself how difficult it was for him to transition from his usual diet/obsession with sweets and junk food to vegetables and healthy food. I'm hoping that my poem can help motivate others going through the same problem! You can do it! :-)


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