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Boat in the Sea

January 27, 2015
By noor_nikki BRONZE, Bainbridge Island, Washington
noor_nikki BRONZE, Bainbridge Island, Washington
3 articles 5 photos 6 comments

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I loved saying thank you to you because I wanted to hear your welcome


Wide open sea,
is all i can see.
There sailing a boat,
Quiet unable to float.
The world is the sea,
My life the boat all uneasy.
All i can live with is hope;
To find my safest shore.
I need a way to steady me;
The storm is splashing in sea.
My mind all confused,
But my heart all amused.
My heart loves uncertainess,
Whereas my mind demand flawlessness.
Within itself is a storm.
Clashing of atoms.
I don't know whose the sailor,
Is it me or the sea?
Please tell me oh creator!



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on Apr. 15 2015 at 8:41 pm
noor_nikki BRONZE, Bainbridge Island, Washington
3 articles 5 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
I loved saying thank you to you because I wanted to hear your welcome

Awww! Thank you!:) you are the first to comment on my any work! I really appreciate it! :)

WyldWood said...
on Apr. 12 2015 at 11:15 pm
Well written, well thought, well expressed :-) Thank you! And perfect photo to illustrate your poem!