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a poem

January 5, 2009
By Jeremy SILVER, Courtland, Virginia
Jeremy SILVER, Courtland, Virginia
6 articles 15 photos 1 comment

1 Life to live
2 sisters
3 sets of grandparents
4 brothers
5 days of school
6 siblings
7days a week
8 seconds behind
9 hours to sleep
10 minutes to write a poem


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on Dec. 23 2011 at 8:57 pm
Countrylife4 GOLD, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday soon we're gonna catch that dream we've been chasing"
"Seven days without a horse makes one weak."
"The worst part of riding is when you dismount."

Insult my clothes, I say, “Okay, thanks for the compliment.”
Insult the way I look, I say, “Thanks for notifying me.”
Mock me and say riding isn’t a sport, and I’ll say,”You say that ’cause you can’t ride.” But before you make fun of my horse, make sure you have “911″ on your speed dial.

I like it! Great job :)

jwlamm said...
on Jan. 28 2009 at 5:36 pm
this one was a poem that i kind of wrote in a hurry and tried not to really write with any particular technique in mind... i just wrote it and i think it worked out well