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Finished

December 1, 2014
By Rylee Freeman BRONZE, Springfield, Missouri
Rylee Freeman BRONZE, Springfield, Missouri
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Two pieces of

wood carved

from nature's

leafy giant. F

ormed togeth

er to create t

he symbol kn

own worldwide. Son of God was nailed,

hands and feet, to this towering totem. Hi

s blood dripped for us. The tears he crie

d, his face distorted in agony, for us. Th

ose who watc

ched on that fa

teful day shiel

ded their teary

eyes and plead

ed for the tortu

rers to stop. Wh

ipped, bruised, a

nd scarred, He di

ed uttering 3 wor

ds: "It is finished."


The author's comments:

This was a visual poem so it is supposed to look like a cross but since I couldn't center it when I submitted it, it looks like half a cross. My apologies for that. I am a Christian and I have loved expressing what God has done for us and how much He loves us through my poems. Hope you enjoy it!


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