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I Come From

October 8, 2014
By AdamJ BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
AdamJ BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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I am from the west side
I come from 7 mile and Sunderland
I come from Emerson Elementary School
I come from Valerie and Leroy James
I come from watching cartoons on TV
I come from my friends and brothers
I am from family picnics at Belle Isle
I come from Rosedale Baseball league
I come from enduring the radical weather of the spring season playing baseball for 12 years


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Adam has a short and simple poem. He is repetitive and not very detailed. He used imagery a little bit, but not much. He didn’t make many revisions to this poem. He rearranged a few lines around so his topics wouldn’t bounce around on separate lines. He used diction when he was talking about the weather.


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