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no one came

May 27, 2014
By fishin_queen BRONZE, Sanford, Florida
fishin_queen BRONZE, Sanford, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
never give up on your dream


Its dark I don’t know where I am… I can’t see, everything is blurry. I’ve been down here for a while waiting to be rescued no one has come for me. I’m scared; I can’t get out of here. I’m bleeding badly on my leg. I’ve been screaming for help but no one has heard me, my heart pounds a million miles per hour. It’s been four weeks now, I bet my parents are wondering where I am but don’t even bother to look for me. It’s not like anyone cares anyway, maybe I should just die down here. My life is so terrible I’ve seen so many people die in my life, I have no one. Maybe me dying in this dark, wet, creepy 10ft hole is the best thing right now. I see the light shining in, I see something shimmer, I crawl over there to see what it was… it’s a phone, I struggle to try to make it work… no use. I threw the phone at the wall and start to cry loudly yelling on the top of my longs, SOMEONE PLZ HELP ME!!! PLZ. Like always no one heard me. I start to tell myself that everything is going to be alright and saying that nothing is going to happen… all of a sudden I hear a car going by, HELP!!! I’M DOWN HERE PLZ!!! I hear a loud screeching noise like the care was stopping. I yell again HEY I’M DOWN HERE HELP!!! I see a shadow, “thank god I’m saved” the tall and kinda lanky man looks down and says with a very loud but deep voice “HELLO IS ANYONE DOWN HERE”… I yell yes, yes sir I am down here… he walk away like he heard nothing… did he not hear me? I started to cry again. How did he not hear me? Then I realized… when I fell I must of hit my head so hard at the bottom that my head cracked openand i bled out and died, I was dead. I heard another car it was the same man from a few hours ago but this time he brought more people to check the hole out, this time I did not say anything cause obviously they will not here me, so I watched. A short and dumpy man came down with tools hanging from his belt and some ropes, he picked up the phone that was mine at one time, and they also found my body, all rotten and worthless. The man yelled to the people above “I FOUND HER” , i wish they could hear me. they picked me up and laid me down on the surface, they were wondering how long i was down there, and i said to my self long enough, I was nothing to anyone, no one ever came looking for me, and the sad a pathetic part about all this is that I was only on the backyard of my own house… no one came for me.


The author's comments:
it is about a girl who fell in this hole and died, and her spirit stayed down there with her and waited for someone to save her, but no one came, and when they did it was to late.

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