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Bridesmade Prison

May 20, 2014
By Sam Huguley BRONZE, Elgin, Illinois
Sam Huguley BRONZE, Elgin, Illinois
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Her name was Samantha Hosea and this is how she got in jail.

She was at the dinner table when her sister’s boyfriend proposed. When he did, her dad gave her sister their grandmother’s four million dollar ring to have for the wedding. That wasn’t right; she was the oldest, she was supposed to get the ring and she was her grandmother’s favorite. She was furious and she had to find a way to get the ring!

She knows they are going to put it in the safe. She wants to steal it and replace it with a fake. So she has a ring custom made. Then, she pretends to be drunk with everybody else but she knew what was going on. When the guard showed her and everybody the ring, she fell on the ring and knocked it under the safe and when she went to pick it up she swapped the real one with the fake. The security guard put the fake in the safe and the real ring was hers. But she couldn’t run away or they would know she took it, so she had to stay. The next thing they did was rehearse because the wedding was in a week. She put the ring in her flowers so she could get it later.

Later, the bride and groom found out they had a fake ring when the bride tried it on and it weighed less. So they checked it and it really was a fake. Now the police are on the scene.

The detectives working on this case are Bob Siers, Sherlock Holmy (not the original), Arianna King and Roberto del Rio del Dehann. Roberto is the lead detective with his partner Arianna. Arianna is in a relationship with Bob whose partner is Sherlock. Bob is a genius who can play anything he sees in his head again and he can walk around it in and see things. Sherlock is his best friend who is a nurse at the vet’s office. They do not work for the police station like Roberto and Arianna. They have a private office where they don’t have to get cases from the police. They are also hired to find things like dolls and sometimes serial killers. Their office is called “Find It”; also the title of their new book is called “Find It”.

Now Bob went sniffing around while Roberto and Arianna did the police work. Sherlock started to flirt with a bridesmaid and got a date with Samantha Hosea. For those who don’t remember, she kind of stole the ring so he is in trouble. While Sherlock is flirting, Bob is in the video room with the police and they’re watching the video camera trying to see if someone broke in but no one did which was troubling because who took the ring?

Bob and Sherlock wanted to get answers so they got the groom and all of the friends drunk so they would spill. The groom said that he didn’t even want the ring because his father-in-law made the night all about him by bringing out that ring. Plus, he said he took a long time looking for the ring he gave her so he was happy the ring was missing. Then he said something that shocked them both. His mother-in-law was mad because she wanted to have the ring and sell it. Now, Bob has two suspects.

He first wanted to inspect the mom so he followed her around a little and got a list of all her phone records. She had called a local pawn shop a few times but beside that she had just called spas. Bob went to the pawn shop while Sherlock went to go on a date with Samantha at the beach.

While at the pawn shop, Bob asked for a record of all the rings bought and sold at the pawn shop. This pawn shop is not your everyday pawn shop. It was one where you sold very expensive cars, jewels and all rich things. He looked on their list and not once did it mention her name. So he looked around the store, in the mood for looking at expensive things he would never own. When the cashier went in the back room, he opened the door to get to the back room and Bob saw the mother making out with the owner in the back of the shop. Now he knows that the mother-in-law was nothing but a lousy wife.

It was time to see if the groom had stolen the ring to get the money and so that his wife would have the ring he picked out. He started to tail the groom and to look at his phone records too. His phone records were clean but when they started to tail him, they caught him going to the pawn shop. They followed him in. He was selling a piece of fine china from his wife’s house which puzzled them. He went up to ask him why. He said he has been feeding off of his parents but they cut him off so he went bankrupt and had no place to stay. He was using things he stole until he got the job he interviewed for. The groom is just a crummy thief in love.

Then they got Sherlock’s date drunk to get answers out of her. She said two things. The first was that she has to have the right set of flowers and second the ring should have been hers. So they looked at her phone records and to their surprise she had made a few recent calls to a magic shop that was close by. They said, “off to the shop” and ran away.

While at the magic shop, the guy said that she had wanted to know how to do one trick. It was to magically make something disappear into your sleeve and get it in your sleeve quickly without smoke. So they went and tailed Samantha to see what they could find out. When they did she wento to “locks lock” which was a crummy safe and lock place. They also had the ultra-lock one million which was the best lock ever made. It is the size of two computers stacked on top of each other. When she put it in her car, she put a small envelope in it and closed it up.

Today is the wedding. Bob and Sherlock were invited because they were helping find the ring and were now friends with the groom. While the bride walked in, Bob put it all together by walking back through the scenes and when the music finished he screamed.

I GOT IT!!!!!!

He said it was the mother in law. I saw her at the pawn shop with a ring box making out with the owner probably so he would buy the ring so she could come back and get it later and so he wouldn’t put it in the books. It would be safe since most people can’t afford that. Then she would steal it and have the money and the ring. She had Samantha steal the ring, buy a fake and buy a lock box promising to give it up when she withered away I’m guessing. But when Samantha had to hide the ring in her flowers because the bride needed more practice your plan was thrown off. That’s why your flowers had to be perfect. If you think I am wrong check the lock box I saw Samantha write on the lock box to put in the wine cellar.

They put a hold on the wedding and went to the house and it was there so Bob was paid and Samantha and her mother became cell mates. The end



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bexhug said...
on May. 23 2014 at 11:42 am
Great job!