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Friendship

May 9, 2014
By RavenWillowTree PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
RavenWillowTree PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
26 articles 9 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a thousand words to feel alive, and one to die.


A word untold
is forever forgotten
in ice, frozen and
forever lost.

Is forever forgotten
my friendship
forever lost
and diminished.

My friendship
can fight your storms of lost
and diminished
dreams.


The author's comments:
This is a triple stanza pantoum.

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on Jul. 14 2014 at 9:52 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

Nice imagery I liked it a lot though it's kind of sad saying that your friendship is forever lost :( I don't know  where i'd be without my best friend and i certainly don't want to :P Other than that it was really good carry on ^_^