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Rhythm Of The Rain

November 19, 2008
By jessvente PLATINUM, Athens, New York
jessvente PLATINUM, Athens, New York
26 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Behind closed doors
My heart beats with yours
Our breath falling to the
Rhythm of the rain

The way you smile
The way you gaze
I am begging to be realeased
Secret love in which
I fall a slave

How like this will we continue to live
Soul aches to feel your warmth
Your smooth touch Your gentle love
Long to recieve the love I give

Our bodies mimic the
Movement of the sea
I stand on the shore
While you swim so free
I am chained to your love

I hunger for your company
I feed off of the pain
Our breath falling to the
Rhythm of the rain...

The author's comments:
I am addicted to the power of words.

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Favorite Quote:
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this is so beautiful. you have a great talent. keep using it

on Jan. 12 2010 at 7:27 am
Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"She was fascinated with words. To her words were things of beauty, each like a magical powder or potion that could be combinded with other words to create powerful spells." From: Lighting(By: Dean Koontz)

This is very beautiful. I love it!