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Ode to My Sparechange

April 5, 2014
By AGDDavy SILVER, Tamarac, Florida
AGDDavy SILVER, Tamarac, Florida
9 articles 9 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you believe that your dream already came true, it is easier to achieve it and harder not to make it happen."
-A.G.D. (Me)


The ocean of my pocket
OPEN and widely empty and
full
The death of humanity
on these pieces of
hard metal

Savage beasts feast
on my pocket as if
starved for centuries
Patient lions that have
earned tactic, and skill
after scrutinizing prey
Ugly bears maul after
my pocket of hard metal
with complete disregard
My life means nothing
compared to these spheres
of inevitable doom

The shallow pool of my pocket
CLOSED and short and
round
The death of my God
on these worthless pieces
of metal

Raw transition metals worth
more to man than the
Gold-paved streets of heaven
Patient are the creatures
that think they have
learned how to fool God
Ugly monkeys that maul
brethren over a small piece of banana
with large amounts already on their person
My life is surely
wasted on these spheres
of unending doom

These spheres, called my sparechange



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AGDDavy SILVER said...
on Apr. 12 2014 at 2:04 pm
AGDDavy SILVER, Tamarac, Florida
9 articles 9 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you believe that your dream already came true, it is easier to achieve it and harder not to make it happen."
-A.G.D. (Me)

Thank you so much! I had to edit it so much, I'm glad it turned out great!

on Apr. 12 2014 at 2:00 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

This is well written I like it :)

on Apr. 12 2014 at 9:06 am
Roy.M.Hunter GOLD, Lamar, South Carolina
18 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"sticks & stones may break my bones, but words can't hurt me."

it was beutifull i'm crying

on Apr. 12 2014 at 9:05 am
j.g.poems PLATINUM, Naples, Florida
29 articles 6 photos 43 comments
i love your word choice!

AGDDavy SILVER said...
on Apr. 11 2014 at 7:42 pm
AGDDavy SILVER, Tamarac, Florida
9 articles 9 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you believe that your dream already came true, it is easier to achieve it and harder not to make it happen."
-A.G.D. (Me)

Thank you!  

on Apr. 11 2014 at 7:39 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Wow! A whole new meaning to a simple everyday thing! Great work! 

AGDDavy SILVER said...
on Apr. 10 2014 at 8:54 pm
AGDDavy SILVER, Tamarac, Florida
9 articles 9 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you believe that your dream already came true, it is easier to achieve it and harder not to make it happen."
-A.G.D. (Me)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

on Apr. 10 2014 at 8:45 pm
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

Brings a whole new meaning to spare change! :)