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Embracing You....

November 8, 2008
By Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
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The chinaberry trees, and fields of young roses, embracing the spirit of a child
With rosy cheeks and pretty bare feet, her dreams carried here to run wild.
Innocence lingers in the coolness of the breeze as she lies down on her back...
Her eager heart and chiming thoughts what we all seem to lack.
If only the world could all dream in color, and see through the eyes of a child
Maybe the darkness would seem much brighter, the pain that we share worth while.
Cherish old memories,but keep your heart young, for tomorrow's a future to have.
Embracing you, a field of young roses....live, love, and laugh.

The author's comments:
Writing is my passion...I really hope you enjoy my poem!


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hail97 said...
on Aug. 29 2012 at 9:54 pm
hail97, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.

Beautiful! I love it! <3

on Nov. 27 2011 at 10:49 am
Pianoartist BRONZE, Kechi, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"Give up.....on me giving up." - Naruto Uzumaki ;)

This was absolutely wonderful. You are a very gifted poet. Keep up the good work! :)

on Nov. 27 2011 at 12:37 am
tweetiebruce PLATINUM, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like music - You can make mistakes so you try again. But when the piece can't be helped you try again another time.

The imagery is brilliant in this poem :) Never Stop writing, i have read other pieces by other people and I have to admit this is better than many other poems out there :)

on Nov. 5 2011 at 10:55 am
She-who-loves-love SILVER, Tecumseh, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Once you eliminate the impossible, whatever left, no matter how improbable, must be the truth.
-Sherlock Holmes

I usually have something to say about the structure and whatnot of poems I read, but I have nothing to add to yours. They are perfect in every way.

on Sep. 3 2010 at 8:46 pm
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing ever truely dies, it just transforms into something beautiful

Okay i just wanna say i think you're like super good! and i wanna tell you that i'm originally from Alto!!!  I love East Texas like sooo much!(: Keep writing and prove to everyone that just because you're from a small town doesnt mean u dont have talent because u do!!!!!!!!!(:

Rosalyn SILVER said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 5:21 pm
Rosalyn SILVER, New Freedom, Pennsylvania
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I love it . . it is pure.