Your missing captialization, wording could have been much better. For example. "sometimes a girl needs love to feel happy about life and everything else that life had in stored for herself." That sentance as several issues. A) Capitalize sometimes. B) instead of saying life twice, say it. "A girl needs love to feel happy about life and everything else that it had in-" C) your grammar is wrong with the word stored. Use store,  and just delete for herself. Once edited that turns into "Sometimes, a girl needs love to feel happy about life and everything else that it had in store."  Much better eh? I believe it could use some work, but good message I suppose.