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Please Don't Die

October 9, 2008
By ShyeGirlBeth GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
ShyeGirlBeth GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
18 articles 16 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Kick The Darkness Till It Bleeds Daylight, Not Mine, But I Love The Saying....; When life gives you lemons, throw them at other people and yell "Make some stinkin lemonade!"; Otay!

I cry myselfe to sleep every night.
I am SO worried about you.
I love you oh so much.
You are my best friend,
And I know she doesn't love you, but that is NO reason to try to kill yourself.
I am beggining you not to die.
Don't you remember when I thought I was in love with you?
I've been where you are, and I understand how you feel,
But if you care about me the slightest little bit then you will stay.
You will stay here and hold me as I sob, giving thanks to God that you are still alive.
You will stay here and love me and care for me as I do you.
You are my best friend, and I am telling you that I need you here with me.
Please, please, PLEASE DON'T DIE!!!!!

The author's comments:
I wrote this for my friend, he thinks he loves someone. And he tried to smutter himself with a pillow because she did not love him back. This poem is very important to me, and if you can even image what this is like then you'll understand. You might even cry, just like I do when I think about it.

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Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 13 2010 at 12:55 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I felt each line in this poem. 20/20! Great Job!


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