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Sundays

October 4, 2013
By ___Shania BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
___Shania BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
you have to have self disicpline in your life.


Sundays
You wake up and pray.
You get up and get yourself
ready for church.
When you get there you pray.
Prayer always works no matter
what time or day.

I feel like prayer is the
Key your day to make
You stay and say God did it.

Shania did well with this poem. Her structure and the way she set up the poem were nice and neat. She made sure the poem was put together and understandable. I like how she made the poem realistic to life. She made a good decision because everything flowed well. You can visual waking up going to church and pray. She also chose to keep her lines simple.


The author's comments:
I wrote this because I love going to church and I pray all the time.I think alot of people does this to.

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