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Emotion

October 9, 2013
By Anonymous

A torchered heart can hide more than what the eyes can see. Though tears threaten to come, no one seems to know the pain she feels deep within her soul. She’d give anything to go back in time and redo what's been done. But she knows it’s permanent, stained to her heart. Moving on with the world, seems most impossible to her, since her mind is still stuck in the past. It’s hard for her to want to open up to anyone, shes afraid to get hurt once more. She blames herself for the actions taken, for that dreadful day haunts her every night. Her mind replays every detail within her thoughts. She tries to run, but nowhere to hide. She must concur these horrid fears, and show that nothing can stop her, for she is strong within her heart and soul. Soon her fears will be broken, and with time she will overcome the thoughts and images that one fall day brought.


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece, because a lot of people can hide their emotions pretty easily. I have gone through some things that others might have gone through, and I kind of know the feelings you can get from past experiences.

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on Oct. 15 2013 at 3:34 pm
destiny44 SILVER, Niagara On The Lake, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Distance is just an obstacle. Everything that is true, climbs the summit. Touches the sun and comes back down." -Destiny

I thought that poem was amazing. You captured reality and turned it almost as if it was a monster. I really liked it. Can't wait to hear more of your work:*

on Oct. 15 2013 at 12:12 pm
SydneyDanielle550, Henry, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
you know you truly love somebody when they hurt you so badly, but all you can think about is the times that they made you smile.

I loved this.  i have a daughter who is 7 weeks old and im not with her dad. But the guy i was with just told metoday that we needed a break. We are an on and off couple and it hurts because i know everytime we get together we will break up again, yet i hide everything my emotion and my fear of us breaking up again.