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The loosehung noose

September 2, 2008
By NamezTJ PLATINUM, Scottsville, New York
NamezTJ PLATINUM, Scottsville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates...." (haha got to love Forest Gump)

Dont go through,
It isnt for you.
If only you knew,
thats what not to do.

Sure life sucks,
It isn't supposed to be easy.
But doing somethin' like THAT,
is just selfish and sleazy!

Listen to me,
Get off that stool,
What would she say?
Standing there isn't cool.

Don't do this to her,
Just 'cause she's unsure.
Do her a favor,
Cut the noose loose.

The author's comments:
Another one of my poems i wrote recently, i talked suicide obviously. The girl in the poem doesn't represent a girlfriend or a date necessarilly but any feminine figure that the subject trusted.

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on May. 28 2010 at 10:55 am
tori-gurl PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
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Favorite Quote:
smile through everything no matter how bad it gets because it could be worse and if it gets worse well then it can only get better. :)

wow that was awesome. well the meaning wasnt but the way you wrote and rhymed it was amazing. alot of ppl think like this unfortunately but you put it into good words saying not to do it and so on