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Success a extended metaphor

March 20, 2013
By fun3057 BRONZE, Huntington, Indiana
fun3057 BRONZE, Huntington, Indiana
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Success is like a roller coaster, bro
Ther' is ups and downs and loop the loops.
Ups: the success
The downs: the catastrophe
The loops: the bust that turn around to be successes
Like when you messed up big
but it turns out that it helps you in the end.
So, don't mess up.

Well guess what some of us can't help messing up
We are very accident prone.
Like a roller coaster that breaks down half way through the ride.
Where every one is stuck at a very uncomfortable position
Upside down or sideways or even at the top of a hill.

Success can also be found on the other end of the roller coaster;
The controller and mechanics try to keep the roller coaster up and running.
If they can't, then they did not succeed there mission for that day.
If they do succeed then the coaster riders will be happy.
Success is like a roller coaster, bro


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