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Evernight

January 29, 2013
By RyanM. PLATINUM, Klamath Falls, Oregon
RyanM. PLATINUM, Klamath Falls, Oregon
30 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who deny the darkness in their hearts, are the ones who fall deeper into it."


My soul is among the darkest
which makes my weapons the sharpest
they're my unnatural tools
to make everyone look like fools
one of them is my mind
there isn't another of its kind
then there is my heart
it allows me to tear others apart
finally there is my view
but of course that's nothing new
with these I destroy all
make the world crumble and fall
fear me and my powerful might
within me resides no such light
while I'm here I am the leader
make you all a righteous believer
don't surrender if your dare
you'll die anyway I don't care
so as I end my day with one last breath
I look into the shadowy eyes of death



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on Oct. 7 2014 at 6:02 pm
RyanM. PLATINUM, Klamath Falls, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Those who deny the darkness in their hearts, are the ones who fall deeper into it."

No problem. :)

on Oct. 6 2014 at 8:24 am
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

I wish I could give this like ten stars, this is really amazing. I came up with an analogy (metaphore?) for one of my classes about poetry; it was basicly that a poem is like a chocolet chip cookie, the cookie part is the words, paper, and pen the writer uses, while the chocolet chips are the deeper meaning, the message the poet is giving us. "Evernight" seems to have a lot of chocolet chips in it, which makes it that much more...incredible. I hope that makes sence, I wrote the cookie thing late at night the day before the project was do, so I was a  little out of it.

on Aug. 23 2014 at 11:17 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

4 or 5 Death experiences. I thought it would be fair for me to share and be honst with you how many experiences I've had with Death, since you were honest and shared it with me. Thank you. 

on Aug. 1 2014 at 3:22 am
RyanM. PLATINUM, Klamath Falls, Oregon
30 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who deny the darkness in their hearts, are the ones who fall deeper into it."

6 Death experiences. I know what the eyes of Death look like. 

on Jul. 23 2014 at 10:37 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I've looked into the eyes of death before...and it's not...not the clearest experience I've ever had, is all I can say, if that makes sense. All I can say is your poem is great and full of emotion. Thanks for sharing your poem.