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Like Me

July 25, 2008
By AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
29 articles 0 photos 84 comments

My apprenticeship is
But I have much more to
Though I could snatch my
Within just a
I drastically miss,
Carrying up no more than an
Empty hand.
The sound of
Nothing is
Very Quiet.
But as these
Fall into place,
I fall apart,
And those once near
Are gone.
Like Me.

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on Oct. 4 2009 at 1:36 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

this is really a great poem! :) wow i love it. the last few lines are for sure my favorite, they add a lot of depth to the poem. all around very good :) will you check out some of my work? i would love your comment!

on Sep. 10 2009 at 6:53 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore

See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

wow. this is so amazing and heartfelt and so many people can relate to it. like me.

sammy said...
on Aug. 13 2008 at 1:59 pm