Alone | Teen Ink


January 13, 2012
By Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM, Wausaukee, Wisconsin
Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM, Wausaukee, Wisconsin
28 articles 13 photos 66 comments

You feel rejected,
Like nobody loves you,
Says you can't be trusted

You feel alone,
They don't want to befriend you,
When they see you they groan.

You try to make friends,
So many people to choose,
The hunt never ends.

You ask and wait,
Maybe finally you found somebody,
Who will run to meet you at the gate.

Again you're betrayed,
All they want is the world,
Your walk with God is being delayed.

All they want is to use you,
They aren't really your friend,
They only want what you'll do.

Back away from these sinners,
God will help you through,
Those who follow him are the winners.

You don't believe there is anyone,
That will be there for you,
When you most need someone.

But there is! Yes there is!
The Lord is your friend,
He will never die because he lives!

He wants to share that,
To let you be forever his,
No matter where you're at.

He will never leave,
He will stay by your side,
No matter what trouble you weave.

So don't feel Alone,
God is with you forever,
You are never Alone.

The author's comments:
This, is just something that came to me. I actually feel as though God put it in me to write it. What i am for in 99% of my writing, is to show others God's love for you, and maybe, someday, help lead many people to Christ. One of the reasons I plan on doing Vacation Bible School in the coming summer.

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on Jan. 31 2012 at 6:29 pm
Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM, Wausaukee, Wisconsin
28 articles 13 photos 66 comments
Thank You :) i know, it's just how I feel sometimes. well, it may be my own unique way of writing. I don't really follow any certain type of poem :) but thank you again for all your comments and ratings! :) ~God Bless

on Jan. 31 2012 at 6:23 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."

~Luara Moncur

very true shows the struggles of christians of today and even of people who are looking for a friend and those who are alone can fine hope through this poem. I love how your writings are so straight forward yet you have to read to the end for the solution! And you pattern is awesome I've never seen a poem written this way...I don't know maybe that means I just haven't read enough or that you're just a great writer! xD