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Beyond My Doors
January 5, 2012
It's a messed up world beyond my doors
I'd rather just stay cooped up in my room
Blasting my music
And sitting all alone...
I love being inspired by the sillohuetes on my wall
And better yet from the silence of it all
No one knows the trouble I've been through
And no one cares about the crap that I do.
Listening to the trading of words beyond the wall
Wondering if anyone sees me as human at all!
The tears are at the brim of my eyes
Yet not one of those haters will see me cry!
My hope lies in the end
And the thought of death is my friend!
The sooner I leave this world
The faster the false light will turns out!
© Paula B., Katy, TX
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Eliquencity PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 7:43 pm
Great writing. It made me sad. I don't know if you agree with what you wrote, but death is not the answer! Remember you are awesome, and living is awesome! But, seriously, your a good writer! I'm pretty bad at poetry, but you rocked it! :)
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 8:07 pm
thats good!! Its awesome when people can relate to my writings:)
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 3:11 pm
Wow thanks your comment is encouraging:)
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 3:11 pm
Thank you! i appreciate you checking it out:)
Jakethesnake BRONZE said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:59 pm
Nice :) this is really good.
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:55 pm
Awesome! Thanks:)
Allenstine BRONZE said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:54 pm
I really enjoyed it, and I could completely connect with it. Keep up the good work ;)
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:34 pm
aww thanks:)
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:12 pm
thank you! i like when my readers can relate it helps me to realize im not alone even when its seems i am! Thanks!
cassidybrooke93 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 8:05 pm
i really enjoyed this poem - it's very powerful and i can easily relate :)
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:31 pm
Aww thanks:)
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:28 pm
thank you! very encouraging and honestly pointed something out to me i didn't even realize in my own writing;)
Woah, I love this :))) My fave part was, "Listening to the trading of words beyond the wall." I mean, first of all, it's cleverly worded, plus it points out those little things everyone does but remains oblivious to... AND the whole dang thing has such good imagery... :) glad i read it! :)
stardreamer SILVER said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:20 pm
hey :) i love this poem . the way your words flow is very powerful!!
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