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The cottage

December 1, 2011
By artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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the place where I go desperately and anxiously
The place where I walk oddly and shoeless
Because my toes feel uncomfortable
when they feel the cold floor

The place where I violently and abruptly release my insanity, my craziness,my twisted unknown artistry

Where my hair raises up
because of the goosebumps
Because of my frosty,twisted and dark imagination

It's the place where I wake up at 2 am to write what the sleepy morning whispers me

This place is mine
This place is my precious
It's my well preserved iron trunk

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on Dec. 17 2012 at 3:15 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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i'm glad u lik it. I ll check urs too !!

so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2012 at 12:29 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

So powerful! I LOVE this! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! It would mean a lot:) Thanks!

on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:52 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 72 comments
tnx,glad u like it

Skyeblu BRONZE said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:23 pm
Skyeblu BRONZE, Lawton, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"You are you. Now, isn't that pleasant?"
-Dr.Seuss
"I was going to buy a copy of "The Power of Positive Thinking", and then I thought: What the hell good would that do?"
-Ronnie Shakes

I like it its light and heavy all at the same time if that makes sense lol I'm looking forward to more of your poems:)

on Jan. 24 2012 at 9:32 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnx, daph, really appreciate it

daph199 SILVER said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 8:59 pm
daph199 SILVER, Burlington, New Jersey
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It reminds me of a little kid sneaking away to a clubhouse. I get a sort of "cute" feel from it, although that may seem like a weird response lol. it's nice and light :)

on Jan. 13 2012 at 9:43 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnx for the comment, nick

on Jan. 13 2012 at 9:42 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 72 comments
tnx, broke,sure u will c more

Nick-M SILVER said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 6:42 pm
Nick-M SILVER, Oak Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
-FLTDO-

It was really nice-- felt kind of vulnerability in the (or your) character with it. Very cool!

schristensen said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 6:55 pm
schristensen, Coden, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
be you not your neighbor

i hope to c more as well

on Jan. 8 2012 at 10:18 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnx, ijustwannabemelovee

on Jan. 8 2012 at 10:17 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnx romancer

on Jan. 8 2012 at 9:57 pm
romancer2 BRONZE, Atkinson, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
Amazing things come from ordinary people!

Awesome!! Loved it!

on Dec. 28 2011 at 8:57 pm
Sprinkle.The.World.With.Glitter, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
I ♥ Art

Nice! I Love It!

on Dec. 21 2011 at 8:54 am
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnx, goddess17

on Dec. 21 2011 at 8:18 am
NightGoddess17 PLATINUM, New City, New York
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Great job artmantist!! Favorite line: the whole thing!! great job!!!

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 11:31 am
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

this is good ... keep of the good work

on Dec. 16 2011 at 10:14 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
3 articles 0 photos 72 comments
tnk u very much,glad u like it

on Dec. 16 2011 at 10:11 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
108 articles 2 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

I love the line that says "It's the place I wake up at 2 am to write what the sleepy morning whispers me". it makes me love the cottage!

on Dec. 14 2011 at 1:44 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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tnk u very much