Feelings | Teen Ink


October 20, 2011
By RaquelAnonymous BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
RaquelAnonymous BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
4 articles 12 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm slowly melting inside."

Suffocating once more,

Feeling it in my inner core,

I can't take any of this anymore.

It's almost like my heart is torn,

I wish I was never born.

Simple things like taking me to the store,

Or simply telling me you are proud,

But when you scream and slam the door,

I pretend I am riding on a cloud,

Imagining that I was never here in the first place.

I took a test and it said I wasn't depressed,

Maybe it is just stress.

I wish life was like a dress,

You can take it off,

And have the choice to never put it back on.

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on Nov. 18 2011 at 10:26 am
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
13 articles 0 photos 131 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Evil is when the good do nothing"

Amazing imagery here, i love the idea that life could be a dress.

BluBliss GOLD said...
on Nov. 17 2011 at 5:15 pm
BluBliss GOLD, New York, New York
14 articles 0 photos 161 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bella's love for Edward was like, "Omg. He's hot. He's mine because he sparkles. Now I'll brood the wholle book while I'm with him."

Jeez. What a life. I like the metaphor of life to dress, that was creative. For "pretend I am riding on a cloud," i'd recommend making it "i'm". but that's just me. I realy like how the rhyming worked here too. l)