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Flashes of You

February 21, 2008
By Anonymous

Your words are glorious splendors
that become eminent in the tropic winds
and in the dying night
symphonies of blazing violins.

You and I…entwined
between the furious, raging waters
of a past desperately forgotten
and a future being forged.

Your eyes are golden keys
that become warming consolations
to the opening gates
of life’s darkest mysteries.

You can sing the melodies
that capture the tunes of me
and harmonies that whisper
of loving entities.

Together we unite
like rain drops in a storm
becoming only one
conforming to a single chime
that appears like colors in the sky.

To fall more in love with you
and let go of what I’ve held on to
desperately chasing after you
and a place I belong with you.

You can steal my place in time
replacing all my memories
and reaching me
miraculously bringing me to life.

Dance with me within the shadows
of the mid-day sun
revealing the secret
that will never set us apart.

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Vytron said...
on Mar. 10 2022 at 9:37 pm
Vytron, Camarines Norte, Other
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Amazing... Thank you for such a beautiful poem.

eNVythe1 GOLD said...
on Feb. 11 2022 at 2:55 pm
eNVythe1 GOLD, Temecula, California
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Ssneha SILVER said...
on Jun. 29 2017 at 8:36 am
Ssneha SILVER, Kathmandu, Other
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Beautifully written. I love the poem.

on Jan. 21 2017 at 4:21 am
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Favorite Quote:
IT doesn't matte how you start, but it matters how you finish

brilliant poem..........

on Oct. 13 2016 at 8:38 am
Bmiller77 BRONZE, Nyc, New York
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This is amazing! Your eyes are golden keys stanza is my favorite:)

on Jul. 29 2016 at 4:04 pm
Blue-jade BRONZE, Mangalore, Other
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Splendid!! Awsome words

Darqu3ss3 said...
on Jul. 28 2016 at 3:30 am
Wow, I love the word choices you used

on Aug. 16 2015 at 10:20 am
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
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You did an amazing job. I really enjoyed reading this:) good job!

on Mar. 17 2015 at 8:19 am
Brin_Santokumura SILVER, Arlington, Texas
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You did awesome!!! I enjoyed your poem very much I think ill even show it to my friends!!! ^~^

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 24 2013 at 6:39 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
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Tweedle Dee said...
on Sep. 3 2008 at 8:32 pm
wow, amazing. flowed really well, sounded great and i just simply loved it!!!

christine said...
on Aug. 25 2008 at 6:50 pm
Wow. I'm stunned. This is the best poem I've read in a while. Very lyrical, and it spins amazing images in my head as I read. Good work.