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I Can Feel the Rain

December 19, 2010
By EyesofBlueFire GOLD, Belleville, Illinois
EyesofBlueFire GOLD, Belleville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"We are only as strong as we are united, as weak as we are divided." Dumbledore, Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling.

I can feel the rain
Feel it crashing down
Wind in my hair,
Storm in my eyes,
Because you're not around
Soaking into my skin...
I don't ever want to breathe again!

Cuz I can feel the rain.

The blood is flowing smoothly
My tears are dropping now
Without you I have fallen
To the ground...

And I can feel the rain
The lightning in your eyes
I have felt the pain
Hid it in disguise

Deafened by the thunder
Blinded by the storm,
But with you my darling
I felt so safe and warm

You left me in the rain
Bruises on my heart
Like lightning tears the sky,
You ripped my soul apart

But I still feel the rain...

The author's comments:
This was written about a friend actually. I was hurt because of a betrayal and didn't know what to do. So I let the poem do the talking.

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