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Cold Hearted

December 7, 2010
By Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)


I sit in front of the warm, sizzling fire
For him to be back is all I desire
Stiff and cold he is now dead
And now he lays in his forever bed.

Even though his heart was cold
To women it was easily sold
I bought the bitter man’s soul
While the cancer took its toll.

Now that his time is up
I realize that our short-lived fairytale wasn’t enough
My heart still aches for his love
While he rests far above.

As the shadows dance across the wall
The memories flood down the hall
Tears stream from my eyes
And from my mouth escapes a cry.

The pain is too much to bear
For it gives myself quite a scare
I hug my knees close to my chest
And try to get some rest.

But I can’t because I miss him too much
I want to be within his clutch
I know my love is gone forever
But one day in heaven we will eventually be together.



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on Apr. 1 2011 at 8:48 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aww, oh my Gosh... this is truly amazing.. its so heartfelt n, like just, wow. its very beautiful

crazymonky said...
on Mar. 30 2011 at 7:26 pm
ok lindsey Miss.mcCormick said only like 4 4line thingys wow u really over do it but it is really good, good job.

on Mar. 25 2011 at 8:58 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Awww thank you so much!!!

AVERAGE BRONZE said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 6:39 pm
AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 48 comments
i believe i agree with Ryter and honeyhill lolz i really like it its very sad though =/

on Mar. 17 2011 at 3:23 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Haha yes I do!!!

on Mar. 17 2011 at 3:13 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Awww thanks!!!

Ryter said...
on Mar. 16 2011 at 8:34 pm
Ryter, Warwick, New York
0 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Yesterday is History, Tomorrow is a Mystery, and Today is a Gift, that is why it is called the Present.

Thats so... I don't know what to say. It's beautiful in a strange way. I'll just go with what Honeyhill said!

Honeyhill said...
on Mar. 16 2011 at 3:55 pm
Wasn't that your English poem? hahaha, it's really good, I love it. Even though its sad, and depressing, and heart-tearing, and weepy, and sorrowful, and...i ran out of words...

jesse_t said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 8:28 pm
Omg this is amazing!!! i was about to cry but then i caught myself. Basketball23 { i know your real name} this is the best thing i ever read and i love you hahahaha AMAZING!!! :)

on Mar. 4 2011 at 9:25 am
omfg good job again man!:) tehe woman!:) love ya again guess what we r in computerz

Footballhead said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 8:32 am
That poem was hearttouching and i feel very touched

generallee said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 8:17 am
this poem is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!

Cheese said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 8:13 am
it is a good poem and it is awesome

on Jan. 24 2011 at 2:27 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Thank you SOOOO much!!!!  It really means a lot to me :)

kasey17 said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 2:14 pm
Your a talented girl! I look forword to reading more. Good luck!

on Jan. 23 2011 at 10:54 am
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Thank you and I will!!!! =)

on Jan. 23 2011 at 10:54 am
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Thank you for all the support!!!!  I will definitely keep writing and tell PAPPY if anything else gets published :)

on Jan. 23 2011 at 10:52 am
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Thank you SOOOO much!!!!  This really means a lot to me :)

bain18 said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 10:39 am
This is a beautiful poem.  You need to persue this talent.  Best of Luck.

on Jan. 20 2011 at 3:01 pm
This is a great piece.  You have an awesome talent.  Keep up the good work and good luck with your future pieces.  This is Natalie just so you know ;)