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What if

November 20, 2010
By loves2write SILVER, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
loves2write SILVER, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"If you want to see the best in others, bring out the best in you" - fotune cookie

what if the rain never fell
if life was lifeless
we'd be living in hell
what if god never gave us a heart
if we didnt love
we'd be falling apart
What if none of us had any power
if we were weak
we'd be a colorless flower
What if we had no voice
if we were quiet
we'd had no choice

The author's comments:
the thing that inspired me most to write this piece is after watching a movie about the revolutionary war in history class, i think it was a very inspirational movie and i absolutley love writing so i thought what better way to express my feelings about it then to write it :)

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mgb405 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 11:47 am
mgb405 BRONZE, Plaquemine, 70764, Louisiana
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I like the rhyme in this poem. "what if god never gave us a heart/if we didn't love/ we'd be falling apart" (l.1/2/3) are my favorite lines. I would change the tone of this poem because not all "what ifs" are bad.