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Mind Reader

October 15, 2010
By bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”


If I could read minds
How lucky I would be
If I looked into yours
I really wonder what I’d see...

What are your passions?
What do you fear?
What makes you laugh?
What makes you tear?

I’d see your deepest desires
Your biggest regrets
Your childhood memories
If you like blondes or brunettes

I’d listen to your worries
And help you make it through
I’d listen to your wishes
And try to make them all come true

I’d understand your goals
And I’d support you
I’d look into your eyes
And see your point of view

I wouldn’t have this confusion
No more deciphering of clues
There would be no more guessing
I could stand right in your shoes

I'd know if you really care
And most importantly
I’d know your true intentions
And how you feel about me...


The author's comments:
I think everyone who has ever liked someone can relate to this...It's so complicated at first when you don't know how if they feel the same. It would be so much easier If they flat out told you how they feel, but it's never that easy so I thought it would be so easy if you could read their mind! Rate and comment it if you like it please I love everyones feedback! =D <3

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on Jul. 8 2011 at 5:56 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Yes I will definitely take a look =)

on Jul. 8 2011 at 5:52 pm
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
22 articles 5 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

by the way, could you check out my new one called Too Many Questions? i'd love to hear what you gotta say about it, don't hold back please

on Jul. 8 2011 at 5:52 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

No problem! Thank you for the feedback! I love when other people enjoy my poems as much as I enjoy writing them! =D

on Jul. 8 2011 at 5:48 pm
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
22 articles 5 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

amazing, i've always wondered what people close to me thought. if what they said was really what they meant or if they were just saying it. thanks again

:)


on Jun. 21 2011 at 12:42 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you very much! =)

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 11:43 am
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 220 comments
Love the perfected thought on this. I wish I was a mindreader. hhaha great title for your piece.

on Mar. 15 2011 at 10:18 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Haha thanks =D

on Mar. 15 2011 at 10:11 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I got it for you, say "you dont like me do you"? i dont mean "like" like LIKE like, I mean it like "i cant stand you like." you can tell it all by how they answer. but anyway i am restanding and underlating to this. I'm obsessed with just about everybody.