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Passion

August 5, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Stars melting away
into the coming light.
Waking up with him
has never felt so right.

The love we had made,
as sweet as the heavens above.
Wrapped in his warm embrace,
feeling the steady flow of love.

In the bed of his truck
his head lay on my breast.
Tracing circles ‘round my belly button,
our hearts pounding in our chest.

Leaning up on his arm
to see my sleepy face.
Bending down to kiss me,
my heart began to race.

His soft brown eyes,
staring down at me.
His body on top of mine,
and our tangled feet.

His strong arms
and perfect jaw line.
His dark war skin
and his lips pressed to mine.

The heat of our bodies
pressed close together.
The whisper of his breath
soft and light like a feather.

The soft moan
as he goes inside me.
The two of us make love,
and again I feel so free.

He strokes my hair so gently.
The thrust of his hips:
back and forth.
He leans down to kiss my lips.

His heavy breaths
against my ear.
Happier than anyone
by having him near.

Holding me in his arms,
he comes out of me.
Touching my face he smiles.
I’m happy as can be.

A new day has awakened,
and, with it,
a new kind of love.
My hand in his being a perfect fit.

Passion and love coming out
of our every breath.
Ours will be true love forever.
True love ‘til death.

© Brian M.

The author's comments:
Can't stop thinking about him...this didn't happen...but I'm happy as can be when I see his soft eyes, perfect lips, and heart melting smile...
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Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 6:19 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Yeah, still friends. :) I'm sorry. My classes are good except Pre-Cal. ://// Math should DEFINITELY count as cruel and unusual punishment :P
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 6:06 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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:) still friends?! Because through all of this that'd make me feel that much better and it's eh :/ don't like a lot of my teachers. It's like they're good people sucky teachers. How boyt your school?
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 4:30 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Agreed. I hate when that happens. :P How is school by the way?
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 3:16 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Ok yeah I agree. I think one of the most pathetic things to break up a friendship is a boy.
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 2:14 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Neither of us should have hard feelings toward each other not matter how it turns out.
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 2:13 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Okay, I don't want this to be awkward either but I am really into him...I really like him and I just wanted you to know we kinda have a thing just fyi.... I can't help how I feel just like you can't help how you feel. Maybe we can just avoid this subject and not talk about him to each other and we'll see what happens and how everything goes. Lets just not be rude to each other about all this and act like it didn't happen.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 4:46 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Idk i guess things are supposed to be? But i don't want this to mean we hate eachother or aren't friends! I hate this i feel bad about this now and don't know what to do :(((
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 8:02 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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I guess things are akward now?
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 9 2010 at 5:15 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Lol thats THREE ppl now hahaha! ;D
Rain777 GOLD said...
on Oct. 8 2010 at 11:00 am
Rain777 GOLD, ?Town, Texas
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Be yourself, an original is always better than a copy! :D

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I'd like to know too..:)

 

alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 2 2010 at 11:46 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Lol it's ok i did that too! Except I posted the same comment but it was worded differently I felt really dumb! :D and yea we will hav to tell who we're talkn bout one day and i almost 100% POSITIVE it's not about the same guy! LOL
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 6:17 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Sorry I posted that twice - It didn't show up and now I feel stupid :P
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 6:16 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Lol. We'll have to tell who we're talking about next time we see each other :P ....What if we were talking about the same guy?! That'd be AKWARD!!! :P
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 6:07 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Lol - We'll have to let each other know next time we see each other :P..... What if they were about the same guy? That'd be AKWARD :)))) Lol
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 4:31 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Hahahahaha!!! Yea hakuna matata! NOOOO worries this didn't really happen lmbo and I'm dying to know who YOUR poems were about! :))))))
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 30 2010 at 8:55 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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I read this and I was like - ...Alana?! Uhm... But then I read your quote thing. This is well-written and definitely fits the title. I'm DYING to know who this is about :D Great job.