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July 20, 2010
By KatB14 SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
KatB14 SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't always get the waterfall short-cut in Mario-Kart. That's life."-I.P.

"Doubt thou the stars are fire; Doubt that the sun doth move; Doubt truth to be a liar; But never doubt I love." -Hamlet

We're good most of the time,
Best friends usually.
But you have some days
Where you won't talk to me.
I don't know why
You won't let me hold you
And make you smile,
Make your heart renew.
When you're unhappy,
My heart does tear.
You might think I'm sappy,
But i really do care.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Dec. 15 2011 at 6:43 pm
Karles_Ivy PLATINUM, Sunnyside, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the bully isn’t the captain of the cheerleaders or the girl who for some reason has it out for only you; sometimes the worst bully of them all is you.- Karles_Ivy

This poem opened my mind a bit. It was like I could see my best friend as I was reading this, looking at me the same way you wrote about your best friend. After reading this I think I need to cutt her some slack. Great job by the way.! You always have really great poems.

on Aug. 17 2010 at 7:58 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1752 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Awww. That was really sweet, I can relate.  You expressed the feelings of a best friend very poetically.