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Another Summer Love Story

June 24, 2010
By blankpages12 BRONZE, Redding, Colorado
blankpages12 BRONZE, Redding, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes you put up walls not to keep people out but to see who cares enough to break them down."

I rubbed my eyes vigorously, hoping with everything in me that it would make the tears go away...

i was going to write a story.
pour my heart into it all.
but as i started i realized all i was puring into it were my tears.
with each word, a tear would fall.
reminding me of all my fears.

you were once a fear.
but then you opened my heart.
and let yourself in.
and now your name belongs to my every tear.
because you tore me apart.
and now i know loving you was a sin.

The author's comments:
i don't know. right now i am heart broken and can't think straight. and this poem really isn't good and it was supposed to be a story. and yea i screwed it up, i always screw stuff up

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on Dec. 15 2010 at 11:23 pm
Cheekymonkey GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
“If ever there is tomorrow when we're not together.. there is something you must always remember. you are braver than you believe, stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think. but the most important thing is, even if we're apart.. i'll always be with you.”

Even if it wasnt what you wanted it to be, you still put a part of yourself in this and it shows. Just remember that things will get better

cherry102 said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 9:36 pm
i think that the poem actually works bcuz it doesn't tell much so we can make it our own. all of us have a screwed up love story just like yours i think. sometimes you have to go down the wrong path to find the right one.