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Minutes passing

April 24, 2010
By inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 96 comments

The clock turns slowly,
yet time passes so fast.
The beating of my racing heart,
begs for time to last.

A year for me to see you.
A month to make you smile.
A week to make me fall for you.
A day turns into a while.

To be honest we know the truth,
Of what is right and wrong.
And to test the boundary is much fun,
but this has gone on too long.

Has enough time past,
to see me like I do?
Time is of the essence,
and I can't wait for you.

The author's comments:
For those times when you don't know whats going on. And you seem like it's gone on forever.

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on Aug. 5 2010 at 9:38 pm
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

this is very good :) i love the last stanza. keep writing, Mel. oh and check out some of my work if ya get the chance !

on Jun. 9 2010 at 6:44 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
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Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

awesome job! i loved tis one!