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And Coins Fell Like Rain MAG

April 15, 2010
By Ariveria BRONZE, Purcellville, Virginia
Ariveria BRONZE, Purcellville, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The devil sold his soul to me for a hug."

I threw a penny
into a wishing well.
I forgot to let go, and
I fell.

I met a young man there
with a basket of fruit.
He had a gentleman's smile
and a spiffy red suit.

Coins fell like rain
as we laughed and we talked.
Two rings were dropped in.
We fell silent and gawked.

Coins fell like rain
as we kissed and got hitched.
And when we finally climbed out
we were filthy rich.

The author's comments:
This was just something random and cute that popped into my head. Who needs rabbit holes and adventure when they've got wishing wells and fruit?

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asofnow GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2010 at 1:17 pm
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ths is sweet.

Ameezy BRONZE said...
on Nov. 3 2010 at 4:17 pm
Ameezy BRONZE, Amory, Mississippi
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I loved it :)

on Nov. 2 2010 at 9:39 pm
Annibonny DIAMOND, Evanston, Illinois
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love this! I is actually pretty funny!