Confusion | Teen Ink


April 8, 2010
By jesusfreak17 SILVER, Winslow, Maine
jesusfreak17 SILVER, Winslow, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Tears are words from the heart that can't be spoken."- Unknown
"Anyone can make you smile or cry, but it takes someone special to make you smile when you already have tears in your eyes."- Unknown

Her world is falling apart
She's dying of a broken heart
Wondering why God wasn't there
Wondering why he didn't care
Wondering why he didn't stop her fears
Or why he didn't wipe her tears
Wondering why he didn't hold her near
Everyday calling out for help
Her cries fell on deaf ears
Her life is filled with new fear
Fear that she won't stop
The addiction has its hold
Depression has control
She craves the pain
To her it's not just a game
The pain is welcomed
She craves to cut
A voice speaks to her
"Please don't"
"It doesn't hurt just you"
"It hurts me too"
The tears begin to fall
He finally draws her near
Her addiction is defeated
She is free at last
Free to love and laugh
She gave her whole heart
To God and the man she loves
He knows the feeling of addiction
But of a different kind
They are in love
"Together Forever" he says
The world says "to young it'll never last"
They are free
They are you and me

The author's comments:
I just started writing my feelings down one day and the next thing I knew I had written this poem. It is about me and my struggle with my relationship with God. It also has a little bit about my relationship with my boyfriend in it. Him and I are both young and in love but the world says it's not real love.

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on Aug. 2 2011 at 8:01 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.

-emanuel litvinoff

wow honestly im not sure i posted it but i wrote something becouse of feeling the same way