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My Secret Place

March 13, 2010
By starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"


Take me away..
To a secret place
Where I can hide,
And be able to let out what's inside
A place where the skies are blue
And I get to be with you
A place where I'm free,
To be whatever I want to be
A place where the sun shines...
Happily, gleaming with pride
A place where the moon glows,
Softly,swiftly, like a wind blows
A plays where music plays
All through my nights and days
A place where we don't have to fight
To live, and to be alright
A place where sweet love can fill our hearts
And relationships aren't torn apart
A place where we don't have to say
Goodbye..tommorow or today
So let me fly...fly...fly..
So let me fly away,
To find...my Secret Place. :)

The author's comments:
This is a poem, for those who just feel like escaping somewhere. Those peple who feel trapped and caged in their own lives. I hope people can connect to this poem just like I did.
Thank You!!!

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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 13 2011 at 4:16 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

This is really prety and I don't know why but it just puts me at peace as I read it. Really well done, and absolutely beautiful. It kind of reminds me of a song.

Check out my work sometime, please?


on Aug. 15 2010 at 2:54 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

The "daddy's womb" is actually one of my favorite oiems on Teen Ink.

..and you're welcome.


on Aug. 15 2010 at 2:02 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"

THANK YOU :)

on Aug. 9 2010 at 10:15 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

That is like your best poem!(starlight26)...I really liked it

...as far as "my secret place"...love it!


on Aug. 9 2010 at 6:22 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"

Wow we really do have  SAME points of views! Don't worry i'll check out all of your rticles. I  hope you enjoyed my writing :)

on Aug. 8 2010 at 2:45 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
32 articles 2 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There’s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity—falling over and over again, thinking that won’t happen to me"

I know I said the same thing on your other article but only because we have the same point of view, I'm still waiting for this one to be posted also. Its title is 'Camps Provided Escape' another similar one coming soon is 'A Secret Everything.'

on Jun. 15 2010 at 7:39 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"

Thank You!!!! I will :)

Oh, and if you'd like, I have some other work as well...one is called I looked for a star. I think you'll like it. :D


on Jun. 13 2010 at 11:51 pm
SarahJumps SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people.
-Eleanor Roosevelt

I think, at a child's birth, if a mother could ask a fairy godmother to endow it with the most useful gift, that gift should be curiosity. -E.R

this is very pretty. :) check out my stuff


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