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Onced that girl

March 21, 2010
By Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
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Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
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"You can hurt me with the truth, but don't comfort me with your lies."

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Tired and sick.
That's how I feel.
I feel like some kind of robot.
I live without living.
I just take up space.
Why am I here?
Why am I such a disaster?
I try my best to please everyone.
Yet still I'm the forgotten one.
I'm the one who's the mess.
The one who can't do nothing right.
Why was I born?
Was it to suffer?
I'm done with it. I don't want it anymore.
This is not where I belong.
I want to get out.
I wanna have fun.
I wanna be free.
Like the girl I once use to be.

© Kriztille J., Briarwood, NY

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Squishy-Squish SILVER said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 1:16 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
8 articles 2 photos 36 comments

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"You can hurt me with the truth, but don't comfort me with your lies."

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→:) Thanks :)
Sill_Sitter11 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 9:22 am
Sill_Sitter11 BRONZE, Milan, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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This is the kind of poem that Sarah would write. Why you ask? She writes about those people who just seem to take up space and not knowing what their here for. I like it. Yepperz!
Squishy-Squish SILVER said...
on May. 4 2010 at 6:44 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
8 articles 2 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can hurt me with the truth, but don't comfort me with your lies."

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→Thanks Granma LOL :D
Hush1 GOLD said...
on May. 3 2010 at 4:34 pm
Hush1 GOLD, Immokalee, Florida
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"Music is life, Music is soul and that is a fact. Music helps you cope with all kinds of mixed emotions."

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Awesome writer as a friend!!!! See ya at skool granddaughter! lol :)
Squishy-Squish SILVER said...
on Apr. 24 2010 at 8:46 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
8 articles 2 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can hurt me with the truth, but don't comfort me with your lies."

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→Just tryin' to do my best :)
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 4:04 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

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great job!! your writing never fails to impress me!! keep it up! :)