Undone | Teen Ink


February 21, 2010
By writerscramp01 GOLD, Green Bay, Wisconsin
writerscramp01 GOLD, Green Bay, Wisconsin
11 articles 6 photos 51 comments

Sitting in the background
Drifting from group to group
Ever since you stabbed my back
I've slowly been coming Undone
I called you my best friend
You went and got mad
I wouldn't hook you up with my Best guy friend
I wouldn't get in the middle
You called me a hipocrite
When did I ever go against these words?

I don't know who to trust
I act as if I don't really care
But every time you pass me
You have some snide remark
I know noone believes you
That you've alienated everyone
But look at whos now coming undone
People just talk, as I smile and nod
I see sympathy but my mind is numb
I finally see, that I'm coming undone

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on Apr. 25 2010 at 6:57 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

i take it that this was based on real feelings? i hope u n ur friend hav worked things out...good poem tho!! real emotion came out of it.