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It's Love

September 20, 2009
By Cruzer SILVER, Paramus, New Jersey
Cruzer SILVER, Paramus, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments

I wait everyday
For you to pass my way
But when you finally do
I have nothing to say.

I always check both sides
For you to grace my eyes
But when you finally do
I fall behind my guise.

Why then do I bother, everyday?
Why can't I keep this crush at bay?
Why must I live in disarray
And pray for these feelings to just go away?

Because it's love and it can't be tamed;
I'll sit here and take all the blame
For waiting and watching ‘til the end of time,
Even though you'll never be mine.

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This article has 24 comments.

Girl-Writer said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 10:49 pm
So everyone else has already said what I have to say - perhaps when you've written an anthology (?? is that correct? Anthology ^^) and you've become a famous author I'll be able to think of something new to say. Nice work Cruzer

on Mar. 27 2010 at 4:09 pm
Sweatheart SILVER, BPT, Connecticut
5 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can do anything

really good a lot of people can relate to this keep on writing

on Mar. 27 2010 at 10:15 am
GoddessAbby BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
My favorite quote is from Maximum ride "Fly on!" of "Soar to survive."

This poem explains how I feel every singal day of my sad,sad life. I hope it will changs...soon.

on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:24 pm
nicdal85 SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be kind to everyone you meet, because you never know what people are going through"
-im not sure, i'll find out=)

i love this!

haha that was pretty much my life

for two years

Escaped GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 12:47 pm
Escaped GOLD, Litchfield, Illinois
19 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Lets go make daisy chains in the grass, but only if its 74 degrees or above. I would like to fall in love with you." (:

I'm in love with this...


Read some of mine and comment? I'd be honored(:

on Mar. 5 2010 at 9:30 am
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

Very relateable.

Very good.

Keep it up!

on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:31 am
ThunderLovestheRain SILVER, Brookhaven, Mississippi
9 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't fret when it rains on your parade...just learn to dance in it."

"Be yourself...everyone else is already taken."

"Speak your mind, even if your voice shakes."

This is great...keep writing! :)

on Jan. 29 2010 at 11:10 am
thatchickalana SILVER, Berwick, Maine
8 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
look to the future, leave the past .

i absolutely love this poem! & i love the flow & style of your writing.

on Jan. 29 2010 at 9:17 am
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Wow. This is a really good peice. Its very....deep.:)

j-rye SILVER said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 12:28 am
j-rye SILVER, Toronto, Other
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace - Jimi Hendrix

very relatable peice.

please read my work!

on Jan. 27 2010 at 7:24 pm
andshesfearless GOLD, West Harrison, New York
10 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.
-jimi hendrix-

this is amazing

on Jan. 7 2010 at 7:50 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

aw this is realy cute. kOoL wording :))

on Jan. 7 2010 at 7:21 pm
ThatBlondGuy SILVER, Mableton, Georgia
5 articles 1 photo 69 comments
Wow--nicely put!

on Jan. 7 2010 at 6:34 pm
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

awe, cute poem!

on Jan. 7 2010 at 6:17 pm
kodyz_angel PLATINUM, Onsted, Michigan
20 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
if happiness seems more like a fantasy than a reality its because the tears are blinding you from the light that is trying to shine through

omg i love this!!!! its kinda sad 2. ik wut u mean by this peice. its like u want the feelings 2 go away because ur afraid of rlly saying nything. it soo cute.

on Jan. 7 2010 at 2:50 pm
luvinlife519 SILVER, Wilson, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your sidewalk is your runway"

you incorperate such reality in this piece. i feel like you took a sneek peak in my life and put it into words! really good

on Dec. 31 2009 at 10:13 am
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Awh, I really like this! :)

The short lines in the beginning actually gave enough depth to the poem. Typically, poems to me aren't very well written when the lines are short, but you managed to maintain depth! Good job.

XCLover GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 11:02 pm
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
18 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

I like it. :) It's sweet and then sad at the end. Why won't she ever be his?

on Dec. 16 2009 at 5:14 pm
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND, Westminster, California
53 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have them, flaunt them" -Circle of Friends

"may the saddest day of the future be no worse then the happiest day of your past" -irish blessing

If male homosexuals are called "gay," then female homosexuals should be called "ecstatic."

I love it. EdytD may be right that there are thousands of poems on this topic, but each one shows a different small piece of the many feels someone who feels this would be going through. Great poem

kheart SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 3:09 pm
kheart SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every second is countless. Every minute is different. When you came around." -kheart

this is a beautiful poem! love the last line the best!