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September 18, 2009
By <3Jasmine BRONZE, Morehead, Kentucky
<3Jasmine BRONZE, Morehead, Kentucky
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As the razor cuts
i tighten my teeth
it stings
a thousand bees puncturing at my arm
i feel empty
the pain is gone
filled with something else
something more
the urge to do it agian
whispering in my ear
i am addicted
i can't fight these urges
i keep cutting
i look down
so many
there's so much blood
what have i become
i close my eyes
and the rest is a faint memory.

The author's comments:
i wrote this piece when i first tried this...i done is because i loved this guy and he broke up with me for one of my best friend's...my mom wasn't happy with me.she told me what could happen if i cutt too deep..i was soo scared that i immediatly stopped..i've been clean for about 5 months now and i'm proud of myself for quiting...for those people who do this please read this peom and think about the next time you go to do this...and no guy or girl is ever worth ruining your body...thanks for reading my peom..

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on Mar. 15 2010 at 8:50 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.

-emanuel litvinoff

so hard to quit. well done with the writing