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The Color of Fear

September 8, 2009
By arElana PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
arElana PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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Fear

Is bluish gray
Like darkness creeping up behind me
There is suspense
Something will happen at any moment
I feel weak
As if I’m tied up and can’t escape
I want to hide
To break the silence
And scream



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on Jan. 11 2010 at 8:42 pm
arElana PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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Thank you.

on Jan. 8 2010 at 5:19 pm
biggerinfinities SILVER, Superior, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
“We accept the love we think we deserve.”
― Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower

Im running out of words to describe your writing

on Jan. 6 2010 at 3:34 pm
arElana PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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omg! Killer has over 450 views and 14 comments and 17 ratings and everyone loves it! PLEASE look and tell me what you think

Saysh PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 12:53 pm
Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." ~E.L. Doctorow

Awesome! I loved it!!!!!!

LaylaViolet said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 9:47 am
OOOHHH! I totally loved it. I'm not really into poetry--a lot anyway. I'll read it and everything, and it takes me a while to get it. I liked this one in particular; I'll make it my last favorite in my 'Favorite Articles thingie'.

Check out my stuff too. :P

on Oct. 21 2009 at 7:01 pm
ajibike PLATINUM, Monroe, Louisiana
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Really interesting. I liked this poem a lot. It's quite different and that's what made it so intriguing. Good job.

on Oct. 1 2009 at 7:08 pm
arElana PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
24 articles 0 photos 94 comments
thanks. i remember when we rewrote the poem too.

fear is hot pink

like me cuz im awesome that way...

lol good times

check out my new article. its called Killer. i have over 100 veiws and all my comments say its amazing

RaquelL said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:22 pm
this is really an incredible poem and i remeber it from 5th grade lol! I would tell my friends but they dont have an account!!!!!!!!! i read all ur work and its amazing the miram article actually made me cry and I showed ur writing to my family!