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Jack and Jill-part 2

August 11, 2009
By lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
25 articles 2 photos 68 comments

Jack and Jill.
Far away but staying close,
I know that they miss each other the most.

The are always so busy.
There's no time to talk.
So Jill sits in her room,
and cries quite a lot.

With her friend by her side,
she trys to believe.
That because of what they have,
That he won't really leave.

Their relationship is still black and white-
when they become a couple,
they will be full of color and life.

The author's comments:
This is Part Two of my Jack and Jill poems. I hope that more will happen so I can write more. :) I chose the box of crayons as image in hope that there will soon be color in their relationship.

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on Sep. 25 2011 at 7:49 pm
bpjrobert SILVER, Wakefield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Veni Vidi Vici"-Julius Caesar

This is good. I liked the rhymes.

on Aug. 18 2009 at 7:30 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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very cute, I like this one too. You definitely should write more of these.