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Beautiful Sinner MAG

August 7, 2009
By alex1709 PLATINUM, Palmetto, Florida
alex1709 PLATINUM, Palmetto, Florida
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Take the girl
Strip her naked
Throw her into the world
And pronounce her as woman

Make her as vulnerable as an open wound
Shape her and mold her like clay
Stretch both arms each way
Try to line her with dignity and grace
Watch in displeasure the roll of her eyes

Cake her face with the powders of an Indian sun
Dye her hair with the colors of a mountain rock
Curl and tweeze
Cut and break
Slap a smile blanketing her tender face

Watch her shed each artificial speck of color on each lip and cheek
Envy her as she screams of freedom
Despise each curled lip
Despair in each cocky laugh
Yes, you turn your head in disgust

You know she shed her false identity
That you so nonchalantly had thrown into her soul
You see this girl
Once created so vulnerable by you
No matter how disgraceful
Her deception is bittersweet
Don't bother to tame
Watch and envy
The beautiful sinner

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on Jan. 6 2013 at 5:58 pm
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

This was truly something else. Great job with it! Please read, rate, and comment on some of my stories. It would mean soo much!!

on Oct. 1 2010 at 9:23 pm
Heatherr-feather GOLD, Coquitlam, Other
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Favorite Quote:
" When you give it all up, you get it all. You end up losing absolutely nothing, other than some well cherished opinions and ideas. "

- Dennis Genpo Merzel

AMAZING !! i heart thissss <3

on Feb. 2 2010 at 7:51 am
Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"She was fascinated with words. To her words were things of beauty, each like a magical powder or potion that could be combinded with other words to create powerful spells." From: Lighting(By: Dean Koontz)

very intense. deep. I like it

on Aug. 11 2009 at 7:18 pm
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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wow, this is intense. Great job, i love it.