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A World I See
Do you see the little bird chirping?
Do you see its broken wing?
Do you see the little boy laughing?
Do you see his sunken eyes?
Do you see those friendly faces?
Do you see their hidden lies?
Do you see them come apologize?
Do you see the cracks they left behind?
Do you see the endless night sky?
Do you see the stars that cease to shine?
I see it all,
The broken wing, the sunken eyes,
The cracks and stars and hidden lies.
I see the strongest of them all,
And I see their tears forget to fall.
I see them breaking from inside,
But I see them try to stand tall.
I see them hide their scowling eyes,
I see them cry like crocodiles.
I see them pour their hearts away,
And end up getting bruised again.
I see them all,
I see them rise, I see them fall,
I see them hurt but stand tall.
But they don't see my silent gaze,
The sorrow etched upon my face.
They don't see the quiet rage,
The ache of being on a different page.
They see my laughter and my smiles,
A simple soul in the midst of life.
No, they don't see my trembling heart,
Bearing the weight of a life so far.
They don't see the lonely eyes,
Waiting for a soul to fill the void.
I hope one day a heart will feel,
The depth of a world I can't unsee.
I hope we set our hand in hand,
And leap across this unknown land.
Do you see a set of dark brown eyes?
Or all the worlds I hold inside?
~M.Sora
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And I know that you didn't mean to sound like we're better, I just said it cuz we, both you and I might subconsciously start feeling that way eventually, I said it just to keep us both grounded yk. Dw about it much.
But I think it’s really nice that we were able to talk about this and understand each other like this. It makes me happy.
And the same goes for you too—if talking like this helps even a little, then I’m really glad <3 😊
But I don’t think everyone is playing dress-up on purpose. I feel like a lot of people just don’t even realize there’s more beneath the surface yet, or they haven’t really thought about it. They might not know that the sunken eyes and hidden lies exist. And with masks, I think alot of people don’t even know they have them, they just start to come down when they trust someone enough .
Also, I feel like we’re still pretty young, so it makes sense that not everyone around us sees things this way yet. People understand things at different ages, and maybe we just started noticing it a bit earlier.
I do think people like us might always notice more layers though, like finding meaning in the smallest things or understanding people more deeply. But I don’t think that makes us better than anyone else, we’re still learning too, and there’s a lot we can learn from people who don't see layers as well.
It's honestly really nice to know that I'm not the only one who can't unsee the depth yk. It makes me less lonely cuz people like you, who can understand my work and connect to it so deeply are out here 😊💖
The people who are suffocating often go unnoticed until they’re loud enough about it, which is kind of the saddest part.
I don’t know if sadness is the only honest reaction, but it definitely feels like one of the realest ones sometimes.
I'm so glad you found it relatable. And thank you so much for all the things you said!
I've been reading your work for a long time, and everything you write is always just so good! I look up to you! And I'm so happy you commented ❣️😊
I’m a high school student who really enjoys writing poetry.
This poem is about noticing what’s beneath the surface and how it feels to see the world differently from others.