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broken soul

August 1, 2009
By ThunderLovestheRain SILVER, Brookhaven, Mississippi
ThunderLovestheRain SILVER, Brookhaven, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't fret when it rains on your parade...just learn to dance in it."

"Be yourself...everyone else is already taken."

"Speak your mind, even if your voice shakes."

Hateful expressions
Piercing black eyes

Feels as if he has no love or pride

Piercing my soul for all eternity

Forcing away all of my serinity

Make the beatings of my soul end

Let the left over pieces of my heart


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This article has 2 comments.

Lonleydandy said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 2:14 pm
One word: AMAZING...I really like this one!

on Aug. 4 2009 at 8:09 pm
Faithband3 BRONZE, Westbury, New York
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Keep writing, this piece is nice.