Growing Up On The Ocean ~A Golden Shovel based on “Waves Rolling Up” by Kimiko Hahn | Teen Ink

Growing Up On The Ocean ~A Golden Shovel based on “Waves Rolling Up” by Kimiko Hahn

January 6, 2026
By sw21 BRONZE, Hudson, Massachusetts
sw21 BRONZE, Hudson, Massachusetts
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Running across the waves, 

Just like I used to when I was a kid then.

The reality sets in,

it is just me, myself, and I.

On this beach,


I keep running, because it is my free will.

My mind tumbles and tumbles.

I lay down,

throbbing in my head.

I lie and just contemplate over and over.


I get lost in time,

The afternoon is done, bringing the evening.

As I almost toppled

I fix my stance

because of the sudden spring.

A few seconds ago

I look to my side.

I notice, I am drenched 

in the partisan,

sand.


The author's comments:

This poem is a Golden Shovel, written about the beach, the ocean waves, and sand. This poem is based on the Golden Shovel written by Kimiko Hahn called "Waves Rolling Up".


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