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Look Who.

July 21, 2009
By bloodykittenz GOLD, Calgary, Other
bloodykittenz GOLD, Calgary, Other
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I am all stains that you must ignore.
I’m winning, but no-one’s keeping score..
My words leak out, missing gloss.
And it looks like I have encountered a loss.

You are it, your the golden one.
A spider and I’m in your web I’m spun.
We walk past, and I spill silence on your face.
And you pull out a smoke from your cigarette case.

My words are colorful, and dripping wet.
And through my skin, words I sweat.
My heart was neer speachless infront of you,
And i cried all through.
Lame, tears don’t speak.
But my throat is cut open, and words still leak.

The author's comments:
I know it might be a little hard to understand maybe, but thats why i like it, kids can interpret it for themselves.

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on Aug. 2 2009 at 2:48 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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you are a really good writer i hope you know that :) <3, Kayla

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2009 at 10:50 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

I don't think anyone really understands good poetry. This is great! ZERO