Crowns | Teen Ink


July 20, 2009
By FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

Pink and hazy orange hues
crowned him like the
beautiful halo he deserved
the clouds, silver and
glinting, sent a glare of
cryptic message, flashing like
a thunderbolt in his
mystic eyes,
beholding me in their vision,
sending a lurch through
my heart
blue crashes sounded over
the horizon, giving me the need
to catch the waves, of needing
to pin them tot he grain
of millions of years of wear and
tear and give them to the
king of my heart
lush green billowed about my face,
granting me a crown of tall,
whimsy, floating life
that clouded my eyes, rearing
off my vision of my one true
a lurch zipped through my chest,
i was not able to stand the
seconds loss of
his figure
all was quiet except for the
invisable gentle hushed blows
every once in awhile
our eyes locked
giving me a split-second of his
heart completely linked to mine
one second remembered for an
eternity, a life-long
even though smiles were not present,
joy overflowed, splling
about my system
his palm brushed mine, sending
my heart into a wrenching
stop for two seconds,
control regained, my eyes shut all turned and twisted into
eternal, exact

The author's comments:
I love to read and write, and i love looking at art, even though i can't draw. when i grow up i hope to be an author, pshychologist, or work with autistic children.

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on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:54 pm
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end." ~Me

Very nice job!!!!!