who? | Teen Ink


July 19, 2009
By brooke louderback BRONZE, Union, Ohio
brooke louderback BRONZE, Union, Ohio
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There is a girl I know.
Quiet, independent, and shy.
During school she does her work.
And after school she sits alone at home.

Who is this girl?

No one knows.

She hides her face from people with her angle cut bangs.
Why does she hide her face you ask?
It‘s simple, so no one can see her cry.

In the hallway people knock her down.
They step on her books.
And they call her weird.

Still can’t guess who the girl is?
It’s me...

The author's comments:
this describes how i am describing an average day in my life. whether it's at school or at home, i will never be accepted.

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on Aug. 1 2009 at 2:44 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I feel so bad for you!!!! Brook, you are a very unique individual, and you should never let people mistreat you!! Pray to God and ask Him to help you, He will, and he loves you to a degree that you can't understand! You are very special, and I think that everyone should look up to you, you are a GREAT writer, and I'm not just saying that, it's the truth, and your a great person!!! There is a song by third day and it's called "Cry Out To Jesus", and there is a song by the Gaither Vocal Band called, "When I Cry" Look those songs up, they really help me!!!! 5 stars for you and your poems!!!